It seems like, whenever I hear a writer talk about how unsentimental he is (and it usually is a he), something pretty schmaltzy is bound to follow. If a macho intensifier ("relentlessly," "unflinchingly") is used to modify "unsentimental," then get ready for pure treacle.
Don't worry about un/sentimental. Just write interesting or affecting words, and deal with it in revision. What you resist persists.
Death and life, Inc.
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Lilith steered me to the door of the guard shack at the cemetery (she knows
where to find her people). S came out and pointed past the display of
flowe...
3 hours ago
