It seems like, whenever I hear a writer talk about how unsentimental he is (and it usually is a he), something pretty schmaltzy is bound to follow. If a macho intensifier ("relentlessly," "unflinchingly") is used to modify "unsentimental," then get ready for pure treacle.
Don't worry about un/sentimental. Just write interesting or affecting words, and deal with it in revision. What you resist persists.
Uncle Don and my 401K
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Uncle John was talking to a woman with a long-lensed Nikon at the cemetery
guard shack. As Lilith and I exited the cemetery, I said pointedly, "My
401K i...
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