It seems like, whenever I hear a writer talk about how unsentimental he is (and it usually is a he), something pretty schmaltzy is bound to follow. If a macho intensifier ("relentlessly," "unflinchingly") is used to modify "unsentimental," then get ready for pure treacle.
Don't worry about un/sentimental. Just write interesting or affecting words, and deal with it in revision. What you resist persists.
Breaths of life
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O leans over, puts his forehead to Lilith's, says "I do the Ha with all of
my dogs. Breath." Went to swim meets this past weekend, so we talk dull
sport...
20 hours ago