It seems like, whenever I hear a writer talk about how unsentimental he is (and it usually is a he), something pretty schmaltzy is bound to follow. If a macho intensifier ("relentlessly," "unflinchingly") is used to modify "unsentimental," then get ready for pure treacle.
Don't worry about un/sentimental. Just write interesting or affecting words, and deal with it in revision. What you resist persists.
I bought beer and meat, oranges and apples
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"Are you homeless?" she yelled at me. "You're MAD." I'd approached
her--seated outside Times Supermarket on a blanket with an umbrella and few
other posse...
3 hours ago
