It seems like, whenever I hear a writer talk about how unsentimental he is (and it usually is a he), something pretty schmaltzy is bound to follow. If a macho intensifier ("relentlessly," "unflinchingly") is used to modify "unsentimental," then get ready for pure treacle. 
Don't worry about un/sentimental. Just write interesting or affecting words, and deal with it in revision. What you resist persists.
You're the robot!
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A and B were talking just outside the guard shack, so Lilith and I 
approached. B said he was fine, well not fine, and he pointed at the new 
camera set on ...
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