some later Rae Armantrout
deviance -
blues songs
poetics of questions -
necessarily open-ended
singularity v. universality
but Narcissus - Narcissus -
didn't notice!
(her) (like Echo?)
(so as to avoid originality)
I can't help thinking
of my toyota, here -
self-absorption is bothered
by imitation?
*
Is this "cerebral" poetry =
compared to Notley - ?
(cerebral palsy)
creepy -
flash of perception -
*
or see
- to Hades? or earth?
insincerity of particulars?
transcendence
(things as they are)
*
all else
e.g., the dead - false syllogisms
empty - (potentiality)
(of what?)
*
- hmmm . . .
*
every poem a world-view
a connoisseur of vacancies - good description of her - title
for a biography?
(or lines)
who? - She
her?
(not "narratives")
breaks up
in the middle distance
like
these
poems?
*
electrical
pole/ wires
(the circumstance's
word is gone)
*
the late work - hers?
right? schtick
another form
of perform
*
the other - the third
who walks beside you
(in memory)
(a tough audience!)
*
(sameness does)
deja-vu
to? -
*
engines - vice boxes [here I meant "voice"] - or
syrinxes
(which it has, in speaking a
word)
(thtat's what words are, after all)
the "managed poem"
(im-)
*
Lilith looks for chem-trails (but it's cloudy)
-
As Lilith led me by (her) nose to the guard shack this morning, S. popped
up from his seat where he often sits out of sight. "Keep your eye on the
sky!...
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