It seems like, whenever I hear a writer talk about how unsentimental he is (and it usually is a he), something pretty schmaltzy is bound to follow. If a macho intensifier ("relentlessly," "unflinchingly") is used to modify "unsentimental," then get ready for pure treacle.
Don't worry about un/sentimental. Just write interesting or affecting words, and deal with it in revision. What you resist persists.
Lilith walks with Tom, a neighbor on our writer's block
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We had a guest walker today, Lilith and I, our neighbor Tom, writer,
musician, father, husband, teacher. He used to think of AI as possibly
benevolent,...
2 days ago
