It seems like, whenever I hear a writer talk about how unsentimental he is (and it usually is a he), something pretty schmaltzy is bound to follow. If a macho intensifier ("relentlessly," "unflinchingly") is used to modify "unsentimental," then get ready for pure treacle.
Don't worry about un/sentimental. Just write interesting or affecting words, and deal with it in revision. What you resist persists.
On "termination"
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My cemetery buddy, Scott (he of all conspiracy theories, meditations on
mortality, lover of trees, who cared about walkers like me, and asked after
us whe...
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