It seems like, whenever I hear a writer talk about how unsentimental he is (and it usually is a he), something pretty schmaltzy is bound to follow. If a macho intensifier ("relentlessly," "unflinchingly") is used to modify "unsentimental," then get ready for pure treacle.
Don't worry about un/sentimental. Just write interesting or affecting words, and deal with it in revision. What you resist persists.
The Temple's new shave ice truck
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Lilith and I followed a shave ice truck and trailer into the cemetery this
morning. Five Sisters, it said on the back of the trailer, above a wooden
door....
2 days ago
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