It seems like, whenever I hear a writer talk about how unsentimental he is (and it usually is a he), something pretty schmaltzy is bound to follow. If a macho intensifier ("relentlessly," "unflinchingly") is used to modify "unsentimental," then get ready for pure treacle.
Don't worry about un/sentimental. Just write interesting or affecting words, and deal with it in revision. What you resist persists.
The park defender
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I wish I had a photograph of the `Ahuimanu Park custodian. She was weed
whacking again this morning on her side of the chain link fence; Lilith and
I h...
5 days ago

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